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Alice in Wonderland idea by ~silverangelmimzy:iconsilverangelmimzy:



Ali is a 13 year old girl living in Seattle, Washington, with her divorced mother, Emma, who is an Art Professor at the main campus of the University of Washington, and has a degree in Symbology.
Her Father and brother are living in Europe between London, Venice, Cairo, and Athens, as her father is a Archeologist.
One day, she receives a package from her father, who was unearthing the remains of a dorm from the 1800's. The package was a beautiful box, and in it contained a strange book of a different language.
A few months later, when Ali and Emma are visiting Emma's parents, Ail finds a strange box. She was studying marine animals in tide pools when she heard a heavy splash behind her. She begins to search for it, and find out that the pool is deep enough to dive into. As she swims, she thinks of it as a large, aquatic, rabbit hole, and that she is Alice, her namesake, chasing the rabbit. She suddenly realizes that she has swum too far and would die from lack of oxygen, but oddly, that does not happen. She reaches the bottom, and retrieves the object, which is a box. The sand has a key sticking out of the sand, and she takes it with her on return to the surface.
Ali hides it in her bedroom, and spends the rest of the day outdoors. Later that evening, while her family is playing cards, she decides to open the box. The box she found in the tide pool opens automatically once she finds which side faced up. The contents consist of a stuffed rabbit with a swirl on it's stomach, a strange crystal pda kind of thing, a cryptex/codex, a abacus, and another funny box. It has the same odd writing all over it and is nailed shut, so Ali goes to get a hammer. When she returns however, the rabbit is gone and so is her ice cream. The things she found first are lined up neatly, along with strange rocks. She notices that the comforter is shifting slightly and so she lifts it up and looks under the bed, and there is the rabbit, covering its ears, eyes shut, quivering under the bed. Its mouth is covered in chocolate sauce, and the empty ice cream bowl is next to it.
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Author's Comments

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the Prologue is alive!
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READ BEFORE YOU COMMENT.
Alice is one of my favorite fairytales, despite the fact that everyone claims it was because the author, Lewis Carroll, was on drugs, which is not true. I have a hard time dealing with people who are like that. i have heard and read alot of rumors about Carroll and the little girl who the story was made for, as well as lots of other stuff. so please, don't repeat stuff about the author that put him in a negative light, as it makes me feel like i shouldn't be reading A CHILD'S FAIRYTALE.

MOOOOOOOOOOOVING ON.
i had to do that cause i know alot of people say stupid things about the story (kind of like twilight and those who have not read it. :P) and i don't want to hear/read them again.
Anyway.
this will be a possible story in the future.
it's mostly based on Alice in Wonderland, but has elements (and a certain character ;) ) from Mimzy, and a mgical girl kind of things.
WHOOOOOOOOOO. Emma Wilder is and Art Professor! LAWL.
Please comment, so i can add things in or take things out (don't comment about Carroll plz.)
it was a total inspired moment.
i basically wrote and wrote until i looked at it and thought "OMG. Wtf did i just write?"
HAVE FUN.
Orz

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:iconlovingvogue:
Alice In Wonderland is one of my favourite fairytales too.:heart:
great job, i would love to keep on reading. :hug:

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"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breath away"
:iconsilverangelmimzy:
thank you!

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ALASKA PWNS ALL.
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IT'S TRUE!
I am Miku Hatsune in the Nozomi Tsubasa family
(DON'T ASK.)
Orz
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Alice in wnderland is such a brilliant story and there are soooo many ways in which you could interpret this story as told by Lewis (who is THE MAN by the way!). This idea is very creative and I would love to read it ever you put in into words. I would love to construct an abstract dreamscape version of AIW (I'm big on writing stories/scripts) but haven't got that far yet.

Take this idea of yours and run with it my dear!

S xxxx

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:iconsilverangelmimzy:
Thank You!
i hope you like the way it turns out!

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ALASKA PWNS ALL.
...
IT'S TRUE!
I am Miku Hatsune in the Nozomi Tsubasa family
(DON'T ASK.)
Orz
:iconlovingvogue:
thank to you, keep on writing! :clap:

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"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breath away"

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